Modern Cars

I'm going talk about all the latest car design like a famous lamborghini and a famous Ferrari, i'm pretty sure that the fastest car is the lamborghini or a different car in the world, like a T20 in GTA 5, the Benz Patent Motor Car company made the first automobile between 1885–1886 The first stationary gasoline engine was developed by Carl Benz who made a one-cylinder two-stroke unit which ran very impressively for the first time on New Year's Eve 1879. The definition of a Car is -a road Vehicle , typically with for wheels , Powered by an internal combustion engine , able to carry up to 4-5 people.

Cars were comfortable to people but they weren't always safe for people because people have died in a car before here's information about it, in 2010, there were an estimated 5,419,000 crashes, 30,296 people died with fatalities, killing 32,999, and injuring 2,239,000.About 2,000 children under 16 die every year in traffic collisions. Records indicate that there were 3,613,732 motor vehicle fatalities in the United States from 1899 to 2013, we all need people to stop dying from cars because that person who might have died could be your own family member. But today we have created more safer and better structures for a car , nowadays people always get injured and maybe killed because they are either on their phone , drinking ,eating and even running red lights. If they just listen to the police and the advice people give, people will never get injured or killed ever again.

Freestyle writing in Miss Komor's

Freestyle writing

Walt: Freestyle write about an image

Today i was in Miss Komor's , she asked us to write a story about a picture This is what I wrote. Tell me what you think in the comments below , thank you.

The wind rushed through her hair as as She descended the mountain at great speed!. For most children this would be an exhilarating , even terrifying experience , but for lucy it was just an ordinary journey to school like other days. Lucy loves riding down the zipline to school , she was fainthearted the first time she has done this. She is now very comfortable completing a full zipline to school.

Lucy appeared exactly at the front door feeling excited from her ride as she leapfrogged off the Zipline. ¨BOOM!¨ she said as Lucy opened the doors of her school , ¨get over here Zen , you are in big trouble when we get home!¨.

As she walked into her classroom room 8 ,  her Teacher Miss Crazy SNAPPED! ¨GET OVER HERE , YOU ARE 12 SECONDS LATE young lady¨ puffing with sweat. Lucy´s face was red as a RADISH! Walking aimlessly to her desk , everyone blasting with laughter. Her school has lots of mean people and she has never enjoyed it. This school was way discouraged than my school.

She pulled out her Mathematics book along with her Reading book , she had extra assigned work for her Homework. She was an intelligent yet slow worker. Lucy had question like 436x234 and 1000x22000. When she got home on top of the tippy toppest mountain in the Town , Zen was in big trouble. Zen was supposed to stay with Lucy while travelling to school but scattered off to the Zipline without Lucy

Zen had to do extra chores because he didn't listen to his mum. He had chores like , washing dishes , making dinner , sweeping snow off the lawn  and cleaning up. Lucy only has to clean her room. THE END

About me

My name is Jeremy Hilton and I am Australian , I moved to new zealand about two months ago. I have been living with my Sister Miranda and my Uncle Sione. I am 10 years , I live near tamaki primary and i walk to school everyday. I am trying to start talking Tongan to my Family , I Really want to speak different language. I have broken Three bones along with one dislocation. I am staying in New Zealand for the rest of my lifetime. I will have some holidays when school is on holidays. I really like Tamaki Primary School and i will stay at Tamaki.

Yesterday , Tuesday 4th of November we all Learned about Transport , we were assigned to pick a type of Transport to write about the first ever invention of your Transport , how was it made and how its used as a object of Transport. Me and Leon wrote about super Cars. Leon chose to write about Ferrari´s and I wrote about Lamborghini´s. We both wrote  3 Paragraphs each but we can do more if we want to. It i a very cool task that was assigned.

 

Athletics split.

On Wednesday, 5th of December I was in miss commores room again , it was because of Athletics , people that did not go to athletics split into different classes. I have some work to complete in Room 10 , Firstly , there is a reading section called ¨Christmas celebrations¨ Secondly ,  I have some questions to do for the text , Thirdly , I have maths and Lastly , I have to write about sports should be compulsory at TPS.

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