Freestyle writing in Miss Komor's

Freestyle writing

Walt: Freestyle write about an image

Today i was in Miss Komor's , she asked us to write a story about a picture This is what I wrote. Tell me what you think in the comments below , thank you.

The wind rushed through her hair as as She descended the mountain at great speed!. For most children this would be an exhilarating , even terrifying experience , but for lucy it was just an ordinary journey to school like other days. Lucy loves riding down the zipline to school , she was fainthearted the first time she has done this. She is now very comfortable completing a full zipline to school.

Lucy appeared exactly at the front door feeling excited from her ride as she leapfrogged off the Zipline. ¨BOOM!¨ she said as Lucy opened the doors of her school , ¨get over here Zen , you are in big trouble when we get home!¨.

As she walked into her classroom room 8 ,  her Teacher Miss Crazy SNAPPED! ¨GET OVER HERE , YOU ARE 12 SECONDS LATE young lady¨ puffing with sweat. Lucy´s face was red as a RADISH! Walking aimlessly to her desk , everyone blasting with laughter. Her school has lots of mean people and she has never enjoyed it. This school was way discouraged than my school.

She pulled out her Mathematics book along with her Reading book , she had extra assigned work for her Homework. She was an intelligent yet slow worker. Lucy had question like 436x234 and 1000x22000. When she got home on top of the tippy toppest mountain in the Town , Zen was in big trouble. Zen was supposed to stay with Lucy while travelling to school but scattered off to the Zipline without Lucy

Zen had to do extra chores because he didn't listen to his mum. He had chores like , washing dishes , making dinner , sweeping snow off the lawn  and cleaning up. Lucy only has to clean her room. THE END